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Blog Hop, Stage 6

I’m in Yorkshire today (I wish) at the home of K B Walker, author of Once Removed, a novel I definitely want to read.

You can read what I have to say on emigrating from Britain, here.

Here’s the whole schedule:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage
22 June Jeff Gardiner Life-changing Decisions
6 July Nancy Jardine Closed Communities
11 July K B Walker On Emigration from Britain
Sue Barnard Who Writes about Place?
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Blog Hop, Stage 5

After a little rest, I’m back in Scotland. Or rather, considering what’s been going on in my part of the world, I’m having a rest far away in the north of Scotland.

Nancy Jardine, who, amazingly, has written and published romances, mysteries, children’s literature and more, has kindly offered to host me this time. Closed communities is the topic and there’s also a teasery excerpt from Neither Here Nor There.

Here I am….

The blog hop schedule so far:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage
22 June Jeff Gardiner Life-changing Decisions
6 July Nancy Jardine Closed Communities
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The Fire in Senses

This time last week we were just recovering from the forest fire that damaged our garden and threatened our house.

Things move so fast in Israel that it feels much longer ago. I look out of my office window at green leaves gently swaying in the breeze, the sunlight dancing on them. But overhead I can hear the drone and whirr of a helicopter as it comes and goes. Perhaps that sums up what it’s like here. Life could be so pleasant if it weren’t for all those unpleasant things. I can’t block out the noise of the helicopter any more than I can block out the awful news, try as I might.

But I wanted to think back to the fire and try to describe it as a writer should, using all my senses.

Sight

This is always the obvious one and the only one I can demonstrate to you.

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Each time we looked out, it was closer to us. We saw flames shooting up and clouds of grey and black smoke. The flames made us scared. No, we didn’t take any photos from the house. This was after we left it.

As we climbed the hill to get away from the fire, we saw fire engines racing towards it. At the top of our road, a barrier showed it was closed to ordinary traffic.

Now we survey our view of the Jerusalem Forest and see brown where there should be green, all caused by people who weren’t careful.

Sound

We didn’t hear the fire. The main sounds were the sirens of the fire engines. In my childhood, fire engines sounded a bell. No longer. Now they sound like all other sirens. Two ear-piercing tones a major fourth apart.

Another sound that accosted us as we gazed from a safe distance was of planes droning by. Their sound caused us to watch them as they dropped toxic materials on the fire.

Since the fire, there has been a new sound. The leaves of the tall tree that overhangs our garden now rustle in the wind.

Smell

This was the first sense that alerted us to something as yet unidentifiable. “What’s that burning smell?” I asked my son as we sent off our online shopping order. “No idea,” he said going off, but a few minutes later he came back to look out from the balcony. He’d heard the first news report of the fire.

When we returned home after the fire, the smell of burning was all around us.

Touch

The fire had burnt a hole in the plastic cover of the table-tennis table. The area around the hole felt brittle.

We had to sweep ash away. Little fragile bits, hardly felt, that crumble in your hand, or would have done if I’d tried to pick them up with my hands.

Taste

The only taste I remember was of the restaurant meal we had while away from the house. I chose broccoli pie. It came with salad and was very tasty indeed. After that I had some cheesecake, sweet and cheesy.

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You know that question: what would you take with you if there was a fire and you had to get out of the house in a hurry? And the person – there aways is at least one – who says, “If there’s a fire, you don’t take anything. You just get out as fast as you can.”

Well, we had time because the fire didn’t start in our house. We took laptops, passports, phones, money, cards, etc. Fortunately we were able to bring them all back later.

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Ailsa’s Writing Competition

Fellow Crooked Cat author, Ailsa Abraham, is running a competion here with prizes. I decided it was time to take a break from the seriousness of reality. Here’s my attempt:

The stranger standing at her gate asked how much her house was worth.

“The asking price is half a million.”

“It looks perfect for us. Location, size everything. Could I have a look inside?”

She should have sent the woman to the agent, but she seemed pleasant enough. And maybe they’d be able to cut the agent’s fee.

“Certainly. Follow me.”

The stranger wiped her feet on the mat. All very proper and good. She looked all round the house, asking suitable questions and looking suitably impressed. They exchanged names and phone numbers. The stranger promised to get back to her after speaking with her husband.

The next day there was a robbery. A police officer checked the house. “No sign of a break-in. Could the robber have had a key?”

She looked for the spare key, on the shelf by the front door. It wasn’t there. She found the piece of paper on which the stranger had written her name and phone number.

The police officer took the paper, gave one look and slowly shook his head. “Oh dear. You didn’t fall for that one, did you?”

She took back the paper and read the name. Roberta Getzklotz.

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Meet My Main Character

I’m joining in the Meet My Main Character blog hop, in which I answer a few questions about my main character and pass the baton on to two or three other writers. I had a little problem with the latter, as you’ll see later.

I was tagged by fellow Crooked Cat author, Michela O’Brien, whose latest novel, A Summer of Love, was released in January 2013.

What is the name of the main character? Is she real or fictitious?

Esty Sherman. She is fictitious. The name Esty is short for Esther.

When and where is the story set?

This is a contemporary story that takes place over about four months in Jerusalem, apart from a brief trip to London.

What should we know about Esty?

Esty was born and brought up within the closed haredi community. But she has long felt she didn’t belong there and has decided to leave everything and everyone she knew and start afresh.

What is the main conflict? What messes up her life?

Contacts with people from her former life make her current life very hard. She is finding it hard enough to acclimatise to new ways of life without constant reminders from the past.

What is Esty’s goal?

To become part of her new world and to become a permanent part of Mark’s life. At least, these are Esty’s goals for most of the time.

What is the book’s title?

Neither Here Nor There, because Esty is no longer a member of her old community but still feels she doesn’t completely belong  in the world she has chosen.

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As I mentioned, I had a problem finding people to continue with this. All the ones I asked had either done it before or were much too busy.

If you would like to answer these questions, please let me know. I will edit this post to tag you, and you can post your answers next week.

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Blog Hop, Stage 4

I’ve hopped again – so quickly I’m not even sure where I am, but I’m sure it’s somewhere in the UK.

Geff Gardiner is an author who is hard to categorise. Each of his novels is very different, and as his website says, his “short work and long fiction spans and explores genre boundaries.”

Many thanks to Jeff for letting me land on his blog and babble about life-changing decisions.

The schedule:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage
22 June Jeff Gardiner Life-Changing Decisions
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Blog Hop, Stage 3

I’ve travelled south to Milton Keynes and the blog of Sarah Louise Smith, author of Amy and Zach and Izzy’s Cold Feet.

Today, I’m talking about arranged marriage.

Here’s my schedule so far:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage
Jeff Gardiner Life-Changing Decisions

For those of you who live in the UK, US and most other countries, the ebook version of my novel, Neither Here Nor There, is on sale for a limited time at Amazon, along with most of the other Crooked Cat Books. There’s even an eye-catching poster.

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Blog Hop, Stage 2

I’ve jumped from Northern Ireland to Scotland. Today I’m visiting Cathie Dunn, author of historical fiction and romantic adventure.

You can find out more about the background to my novel here.

Here’s my schedule so far:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage

Watch this space for updates.

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Blog Hop, Stage 1

Crooked Cat author, Catriona King, very kindly offered to host me on the first stage of my blog hop.

I’m over there now, talking about my route to publication.

Here’s my plan so far:

18 June Catriona King My Route to Publication
20 June Cathie Dunn The Background to my Novel
22 June Sarah Louise Smith Arranged Marriage

Watch this space for updates.

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Launch Day

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As today is the launch day for my novel, Neither Here Nor There, I’m posting my reading of chapter one.

Neither Here Nor There is now available as an ebook or in paperback at Amazon, Smashwords, Crooked Cat and elsewhere.

To win a copy, answer the question that will appear shortly on the launch page.